I am crying,
I cried and cried,
And when there was
No more crying to do,
I still cried
For the creative
I feared losing.
I was in search
Of my own Helium
I’ll stop crying,
Has its anti-polar
P.S. For all those concerned funky reading souls out there, not cryin’ any more. Gosh those salty tears leave ageing marks on my very low maintenance skin 🙂 Noir mood still, but getting better. I just got a breath of windy fresh air while being walked by my dog tonight. Getting back up! Nightie transparent demi-dark night, VB.
P.S.2 (I can never shut those salady-words up): with great and soulful special thanks to The Deceptive minds and Sui Generis for their poetically blogging thinking inspiration and support 🙂
Rarely words can make me smile and nail it on my face for more than 5 seconds. But you are able to do that with ease. Thank you for those words.
So elated to hear 🙂
Very cool: “Uncrippled cry”. And lots more to like here!
Thanks so much Benjamin! Thrilled you like it :))
You’re welcome. Great title, too! Forgot to say.
Loving your feedback Benjamin! Means a lot 🙂
This is wonderful. It’s drenched in emotions and feelings. I love how it meanders to the end.
Transparent noir…now that’s beautiful.
Thanks dear Shanyu. Really happy you like it :))
**edit – really elated
My absolute pleasure my friend. How’s MOMO San doing?
🙂 he’s doing great – and as usual so much wiser than me
Haha. Dogs are wise aren’t they?
yeah..wiser than some humans. I guess.
Maybe. I hope the week’s gotten better for you.
yeah, getting there. the poem was, well tearfully tearful now that i reread it drowning in my very own lyrical sorrow…
as they say, what doesn’t kill you…!
thanks for your concern Dear S.
That’s the spirit! Take care.
So very heartfelt VB. It’s a powerful piece full of emotion. Fantastic writing.
thank you, kindly. I truly appreciate your feedback.