I admire you
I like you
but…
You are magic
You aim high
but…
I always wished
I’d met you earlier
In silent dreams
We’d burst
The mystery
Of everything
All so tragic -
You know that!
I admired you
I loved you
You were magic
You aimed high
And meeting you
I do remember
In silent dreams
We’d burst
Macabre dance
I’d be a step nearer -
Yet you kept, always,
Stepping,
Back,
So icy sharp
You always doubted,
We slowed pace,
And I
Hit
Back
The bubbles burst
And bubbles played
Like foxy drawings
Live - that day
The mystery
Of everything, and
Macabre dance -
Those bubbles,
Burst
Like bubbles that
Explode, white magic,
Silent dreams -
Forever,
Dance
Woah, wow this is wonderful and from the heart.. it flows beautifully.. big hugs. Feel free to guest post on diosraw.com by finding my email on this blog’s connect page or to talk! 🌹🙏
Beautiful imagery VB. The flow of this one and the unfolding of the relationship is very well done.
I am so happy you like it, Secrets 💜
Astonishing poetry. Love how it crescendos into a weird little ballad by the end.
Thank you so very much for this feedback, I am happy I got it to flow somehow.
Woah, wow this is wonderful and from the heart.. it flows beautifully.. big hugs. Feel free to guest post on diosraw.com by finding my email on this blog’s connect page or to talk! 🌹🙏
Thank you so much Amber 🙂 💜 💜
Welcome! I adore your work. Let’s connect if you’d like to. 🌹
oooooooh thank you SO MUCH!!! 💜 and for sure, let’s! 🙂
Awesome, looking forward to it! 🌹