Bubbles

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Poetry
I admire you
I like you
but…
You are magic
You aim high
but…
I always wished
I’d met you earlier

In silent dreams
We’d burst

The mystery
Of everything
All so tragic - 
You know that!

I admired you
I loved you
You were magic
You aimed high

And meeting you
I do remember

In silent dreams
We’d burst

Macabre dance
I’d be a step nearer -
Yet you kept, always,
Stepping,
Back,

So icy sharp
You always doubted,
We slowed pace,
And I 
Hit
Back

The bubbles burst
And bubbles played
Like foxy drawings
Live - that day

The mystery
Of everything, and
Macabre dance -
Those bubbles,
Burst

Like bubbles that
Explode, white magic,
Silent dreams -

Forever, 

Dance

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9 Comments

  1. Beautiful imagery VB. The flow of this one and the unfolding of the relationship is very well done.

  2. Astonishing poetry. Love how it crescendos into a weird little ballad by the end.

  3. Woah, wow this is wonderful and from the heart.. it flows beautifully.. big hugs. Feel free to guest post on diosraw.com by finding my email on this blog’s connect page or to talk! 🌹🙏

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