To all the ones
That read my poems
That hear me bare
That donโt despair
The texts
The laughs
The hidden
Meanings
The sounds
The smiles
The profound
Feelings
The rooms
The streets
Snow-covered
Stay
And thick, grey
Smoke
That will
One day
Become star
Dust
Till you will
Sway
That scent
That sound
Oh all
So near
Takes me
To a time
When you
Were here
To all
The ones
That read
My poems
I thank you
Kindly
With free verse
Sonnets
And thick, grey
Smoke
That will
One day
Become star
Dust
Till you will
Stay
Resound
Profound,
Heart-felt,
Unbound
Remains,
Dear reader,
A fragrant
Sound
Silencio
Oh this is just soulful and joyous poetry. I love the rhythm, as others have pointed out. It is in fact upbeat, and even a little trippy. I tried my best not to lose myself in the fluidity of the stanzas.
Anna, that’s some boom you pack.
Till then.
Become star Dust.
Till you will Stay
I love this poem. It was lighter than air.
Thank you kindly!! Glad you loved it ๐
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Thank you so much!!! โบ๏ธ
Love this.
So well written ๐ค๐ค
Oh thanks so much Charmer, so cool that you love it โบ๏ธ!!!
You’re most welcome my friend
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Beautiful, the flow was wonderful. ๐น
Thank you so much Amber!!! ๐
Welcome. โฅ๏ธ
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Ooooooooh THANK YOU ST! ๐โค๏ธ๐
Great atmosphere in this poem, love it!
Thanks a lot!!!!!! :))))
Well, you nailed this one, using every stanza to build it up into something wonderfully done. Great creation!
hi Benjamin, so HAPPY to read this, really cool you liked it!!!!
Welcome! It’s outstanding. You really set the scene/mood right.
Thanks!!!!!! ๐๐
Welcome ๐
Oh this is just soulful and joyous poetry. I love the rhythm, as others have pointed out. It is in fact upbeat, and even a little trippy. I tried my best not to lose myself in the fluidity of the stanzas.
Anna, that’s some boom you pack.
Till then.
Become star Dust.
Till you will Stay
Beautiful and soulful comment from you too, Star dust master!
This was so m=nice! Such a great vibe โฅโฅ
Thank you SO VERY much, means a lot! sorry it took me a while to answer this comment.
Oh please don’t apologize. It’s completely okay and you’re most welcome dear โฅโฅ
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The rhythm of it is vibrant and vivid. Felt beautiful.
Thank you SO MUCH Kritika, I am very happy you enjoyed reading it ๐ค
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Many many many thanks for leaving this comment, I’m honored ๐บ