I often feel flustered
with your never-ending
sweet-toothed verses
You are endowed
with some greatly
magical tricks
Yet your poem interruptus
meter often leaves me
all cold and bothered
Fact is, I'll never get
sonnet-pregnant
with your words
'Cause you always
pull out your rhymes
at the very last minute
There is never enough time
to come into ode-full
moans and sighs
My daylight dreams
are all flustered and
my imagination drawn
to ecstatic snippets
Lest it get too desirous
of your malicious,
yet infectiously
mellifluous ballads
Oh boy—
this
poem
interruptus
Of yours
I have no words honestly.
I’m in awe with this post, reading it agape. How beautifully you said, sonnet pregnant, ode full moans and sighs, such fresh phrases.
Okay, this was awesome!
Thank you so much glad you liked it!!!!
Loved it ♥♥
☺️💛
♥♥
This is amazing.
Adore it 🖤🖤🖤
Oh thank you Charmer, that means so much ☺️
You’re most welcome.
This was sublime 🖤🖤
🖤🖤☺️
I have no words honestly.
I’m in awe with this post, reading it agape. How beautifully you said, sonnet pregnant, ode full moans and sighs, such fresh phrases.
Absolutely stunning ☺️
Really happy you enjoyed it so much, it was a fun poem to write!!!! Thanks a lot for this feedback, means a lot 😊
🔥🔥🔥 A brilliant poem VB! Love it!
Oh thank you ST, thanks for everything, really 💜😊
This is a really really unique piece of poetry. I find it very unique, and evocative, how you use the enjambment. Well done, VB
thank you kindly for this comment. Means a lot
My absolute pleasure friend.
Do take care.