these days
i feel too mild
to grasp life with
a mordacious bite
i lose my pencils easily
and i permanently
misplace my pens
and pads
my words end up
stored away
in fridges,
where iād rarely
look,
Alas!
lest I turn
ravenous
with
rhyming
lust
my lazy verses,
in arrears,
they become
tears of
m
o
d
e
r
o
b
goodbye
steam lettering
on a hot bathroom
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r o
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r i
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Too beautiful. The formatting, the words, the theme: I’d rather just read and
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Again
thank you for this fantabulous feedback, glad you enjoyed reading
My absolute pleasure Anna! I really hope you are doing well. Take good care!
I enjoyed the way you formatted this poem.
thank you so much, really glad you liked it
This is great from formatting to the words and subject matter. Exciting to read and highly entertaining. Well-done overall!
cool to see you around, Ben, happy you enjoyed reading it
Another delightful poetic treat from you VB ššš
thanks again ššš
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