Under the sea
all somber rites
b l u e l i n e s that twist
and gunshot cries
Those birds that sing
this autumn night
all b e a m i n g g o l d
all dancing brightThese c a r e f u l thoughts
your vinyl lips
their eerie looks
those birds in flight
Spreading wings
that sail - fair air -
this perfect d r e a m
in dark blue glare
And while I walk
up velvet stairs
kiss v i n y l l i p s
write verse to blare
All silver sound,
and d a u n t i n g t o n e s
those wild, and wilder,
dancing bones
A tear suppressed,
repressed, expressed,
two f i g h t i n g figures -
facing death
Some long- g o n e f e a r s
your eyes, in prayer
kiss vinyl lips
I sigh - you dare
All silky, silver,
versing storms,
s u c h b o l d, and daunting
under-tones
Red clouds that sing
this autumn night
all b e a m i n g g o l d
all dancing bright
This dream - one story
all p a i n t e d w h i t e
calm, by the sea;I’ll stay. T o n i g h t
Wonderful rhymes and I’m super impressed with your visual layout and the addition of the bolded letters. As a fellow writer, this poem is such a pleasure to read and appreciate the skill behind it.
Wonderful rhymes and I’m super impressed with your visual layout and the addition of the bolded letters. As a fellow writer, this poem is such a pleasure to read and appreciate the skill behind it.
Oh, thanks Bree, for such fantastic feedback. Honoured to be read and appreciated by wonderful writers such as yourself. 💜
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Beautiful atmospheric poem, vintageblack. Like a scene from an arthouse film.
Ooooo glad you liked it and found it so atmospheric 🙂 Thanks for this feedback, Sunra 💛🖤!!!